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Tea/Tess ([personal profile] teashadephoenix) wrote2009-08-18 11:14 pm

Weekly Drabble Challenge Response: Another Thirty Years

Title: Another Thirty Years
Author: Tess/[livejournal.com profile] mihane_echo
Rating: Rated SS for Squish Supreme
Word Count: 542
Spoilers: Post Series 4
Summary: Donna and the Doctor celebrate a very special date together.
Disclaimer: If you recognize it, it belongs to the Beeb and I'm borrowing it to play with. I promise I will return them (marginally) unharmed. ;3
Author's Note: If you were to flash-forward far into the future of Sounds Like Destiny, you would get this. xB Written for Weekly Drabble Challenge #20 at [livejournal.com profile] doctor_donna. Prompt was perfect.



Donna wasn't sure when the thought had first crossed her mind. Perhaps it had been in the Doctor's arms as they glided over the dance floor together, him in his brown pinstripes at her request, and her in a white gown which he had fancied.

Or maybe at dinner, when he presented her with earrings of Lilliputian pearls, the tiniest pearls in the universe, looking like cappuccino foam strung together on thready gold filament and glittering like stars as they caught the candlelight.

Possibly, it had been as the resort operations A.I. began to go haywire, sending the signal to vent the oxygen slowly and leave the guests to die pasty and blue, and the two of them ran together as they always did, to do what they did so well.

It could've been when the two of them collapsed into the console room, panting and laughing amidst Wil's frantic inquiries as to what in the hell happened (“Watch the mouth, young man.”) and Anne's lamentations as to the condition of her mother's dress, properly ruined by the explosion of the main A.I. terminal at the resort. (“Nan, love, it’s just a dress.”)

But the first time she uttered it out loud was in their bed, whispering it against his ear as they made love, as tender and passionate as they had ever been with each other and yet sweeter for the length of time they had spent together.

His heartbeats thudded steadily in her ear as he glanced down at her. "Perfect? Really?"

Donna hummed softly, content. "Yeah. Absolutely perfect."

"It was just like any other day," he remarked, sounding a bit disappointed. Not very much so, but she could hear it underneath his words. "I wanted to do something special for you. I mean, really special. Not, we're-going-to-see-Audrey-Hepburn-for-your-birthday-special, I mean--"

“Something aimed more my way than yours. I know,” Donna understood. She pushed her hair from her face, never moving from where she lay next to him; with a smile, she pressed a kiss to his chest.

"But I got to dance with you. You gave me pearls. We lived to run another day. Our children are safe and you're safe, next to me. It was the perfect anniversary."

She looked up at him then, smirked as she always did at the sight of the silvery strands fading in at his temples. She loved that he was going gray, even if he complained about it. (It wasn't even a lot of gray. A smattering here or there was all.) But it was a silent symbol of how long it had been since his last regeneration, how long she had been with him.

Affectionately, Donna ran her fingers through the rest of his spiky brown hair, and traced her hand down his face. His eyes fluttered closed as she touched him, treasuring this simple act of love from her.

Softly she spoke his real name, and he opened his dark eyes to focus on her. Donna pushed herself up onto her elbows and gazed lovingly down at him. "You think you'll stay with me another thirty years?"

The Doctor grinned at her, then drew her back down to him and kissed her. "I can't think of anyone else more perfect, Donna."

end

[identity profile] elfgirljen.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 03:36 am (UTC)(link)
Aww that was so cute!

[identity profile] time-converges.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 03:50 am (UTC)(link)
Aw, perfect!! *happy sigh*

I love their kids being slightly horrified at their antics. :)
biodamped: for better or for worse ([dw] doctor & donna. it's canon people)

[personal profile] biodamped 2009-08-19 05:20 am (UTC)(link)


Ohhhhhh. You've made me all squishy. I love it; this is perfect. I'm totally saving and printing it. *clutches it close*

[identity profile] katherine-b.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 05:28 am (UTC)(link)
Ah, so lovely! I adore how well she knows him, how he's actually aging, and his disappointment at not giving her what he'd wanted.

[identity profile] shining-moment.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 06:58 am (UTC)(link)
Aww, so gorgeous :) I can almost see their kids rolling their eyes at the antics of their parents!

[identity profile] nschick.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 08:19 am (UTC)(link)
... you took my breath away with this

*mems*

[identity profile] washingtonmaid.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 04:44 pm (UTC)(link)
awww that is so cute. i love that he goes gray

[identity profile] lemon-pencil.livejournal.com 2009-08-19 10:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, lovely! Perfect, even =)

[identity profile] gatafairy.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 12:52 am (UTC)(link)
*swoon* This is wonderful. I love all the little bits alluding to their time together and I love getting an actual number, too, because it's just... amazing. Sigh. What a beautiful moment. ♥

[identity profile] kwiknkleen.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 03:09 am (UTC)(link)
I loved the thought of the Doctor getting gray hairs. And yes, he would definitely be very vocal on how much he hated them.

Loved it.

[identity profile] indaydreams.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 08:31 am (UTC)(link)
This was just too adorable :) LOVED it.

[identity profile] loves-glamour.livejournal.com 2009-08-20 07:44 pm (UTC)(link)
ok first of all..me in my Audrey Hepburn obsession squeed when i see her name lol

moving on now lol this was lovely!
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[personal profile] sykira 2009-08-22 04:27 pm (UTC)(link)
oh this was fantastic, so happy and peaceful and fullof love, thank you!