24 September 2009 @ 09:12 am
Impressed  
Title: Impressed
Author: Tess/[livejournal.com profile] mihane_echo
Rating: Rated E for everyone
Word Count: 810
Spoilers: None
Summary: Sylvia tells the Doctor exactly what she thinks of him.
Disclaimer: If you recognize it, it belongs to the Beeb and I'm borrowing it to play with. I promise I will return them (marginally) unharmed. ;3
Author's Note: I've been writing Sylvia a lot lately and felt the need to finish this. Unbetaed and I'm half asleep, so who knows what it actually says... -_-;



It took several visits before she was able to stop tensing up every time her daughter walked in with That Man. She couldn't help it; something dreadful always happened whenever the Doctor turned up (though admittedly, the incident with the stove was pure chance. It had been acting up for weeks before he stopped by.)

But slowly, surely, Sylvia Noble began to grow accustomed to the alien's lanky form in her kitchen, and found his earnest desire to be liked by her endearing. It was subtle, a flicker in his eyes when he offered to help with dinner, or the guilty shadow on his face when he realised she was watching him watch her daughter. As though he could feel her inability to accept him and the life he led.

Just the same, every time the two of them popped in for tea the Doctor met her with a patience and mirth that was to be admired. And he was crazy in love with Donna; that was plain as daylight.

As she headed down the hall into the kitchen, laundry basket in tow, Sylvia could hear soft voices. Lovers' whisperings.

"You've been acting very strange lately," said the louder of the two.

"I know," replied the softer. "It's... hard to explain."

"Not really," retorted Donna smartly; she sounded like she was enjoying tormenting the Doctor. "You're trying to impress my mum, just like an ordinary bloke."

She didn't care to eavesdrop any further than that, so she marched straight into the kitchen, unsurprised to find the two of them standing together in the corner. The Time Lord was leaning against the counter and his ginger lady against him, arms encircling each other. Donna was grinning at him devilishly; the Doctor rolled his eyes at her in reply.

"Donna, you think I could borrow the Doctor for a minute?" Sylvia began, ignoring the pair of bewildered expressions that ensued. "I wouldn't mind help taking the laundry off the line before it rains."

"I'll do it," Donna said quickly, but Sylvia shook her head.

"It'll only be a minute. Why don't you put the kettle on?" She gave a cursory glance to the Doctor and headed out to the back.

He followed behind quietly, pausing at the door to gaze up at the cloudless sky. Sylvia missed his scrutinising gaze, but she heard him sigh as he came to stand next to her, plucking clothespins off the line and letting towels drape easily into his arms. "What did you want to talk about?"

Sylvia stifled a smile. At least he wasn't stupid. She took another towel off the line and let it drop into the basket, all the while gauging what she wanted to say. In the end, there wasn't really an easy way to do it, she decided.

"I don't think I can ever trust you," she said shortly. "Not really. Because everyday I wake up wondering if it's going to be the day you turn up on my doorstep to tell me you couldn't protect her this time. Every single time I see you, I get nervous about what's going to happen, to Donna, to my father, to our home, to the people I know."

She looked up at him, watched him as he manfully bore her resentment and her bitterness. "When you're about, I worry. And that's just the way it's going to be."

The Doctor swallowed reflexively, not looking at her. "All right."

"But I worry about you, too."

He turned to her, genuine surprise on his face. He considered this for a moment and Sylvia saw the moment he gave up trying to understand it. The corners of his eyes crinkled and he frowned. "You do?"

"Mhm. Because when all's said and done, I like you." She moved down the line and he followed, dumping the last of the towels into the basket. "You're good to me and to my father; it's been a while since Dad's enjoyed the company of another fella who likes the same things he does, not since Geoff passed. And you make my daughter happy." She gave him a sidelong smile. "That's what's important, I suppose."

He gave her a look that almost made her believe he was as old as Donna said he was; his eyes were ancient and impossibly old. She couldn't imagine what was going on behind those eyes, what he was thinking. But then he waggled his eyebrows and turned his gaze groundward, looking a bit sheepish, and the illusion was lost.

"Doesn't mean I should stop trying to impress you though, does it?" he teased lightly.

Sylvia rolled her eyes and headed back toward the house. "If we can get through a visit without something attacking, exploding or being sonicked, I'll be impressed."

The Doctor laughed as he held the door open for her. "So would I."

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[identity profile] jadeaffection.livejournal.com on September 24th, 2009 01:38 pm (UTC)
Just lovely, very well written... and the last line put a smile on my face! xx
[identity profile] mihane-echo.livejournal.com on September 24th, 2009 10:46 pm (UTC)
Oh, thank you, I'm so glad. ;)
[identity profile] lounge-lily.livejournal.com on September 24th, 2009 01:44 pm (UTC)
Slyvia-love! I gots it. This is wonderful, lovely. So few people treat Sylvia with any sympathy... but you know my feelings on that score. Well done.

Nice icon too, by the way.
[identity profile] mihane-echo.livejournal.com on September 24th, 2009 11:48 pm (UTC)
Mhm, I do. ;D You gotta love Sylvia, she's too squishy not to.

And thanks, I put it together in about ten minutes when I realized I didn't have a Donna with her mum icon. xD
[identity profile] time-converges.livejournal.com on September 24th, 2009 02:06 pm (UTC)
I love it! I love Sylvia - she's scary of course, but she does want what's best for Donna. I'm glad she sees that the Doctor loves her. And I love that both she and Donna see right through him - he's adorable trying to impress Sylvia.
Love it!
[identity profile] mihane-echo.livejournal.com on September 24th, 2009 11:58 pm (UTC)
Mhm, definitely scary, but she's loveable underneath her thorns. And Donna got her intuition from Sylvia, so of course the Doctor's in for it when theyre together. xD
[identity profile] loves-glamour.livejournal.com on September 24th, 2009 04:50 pm (UTC)
hehehe i like when Sylvia is on her best behaviour :) great! and i like your icon!
[identity profile] mihane-echo.livejournal.com on September 25th, 2009 12:00 am (UTC)
She's lovely, isn't she? I kinda love writing her. <3 And thanks!
[identity profile] sonicgirl2005.livejournal.com on September 24th, 2009 05:46 pm (UTC)
Lovely! :D
[identity profile] mihane-echo.livejournal.com on September 25th, 2009 12:00 am (UTC)
Thanks!
[identity profile] grlgoddess.livejournal.com on September 24th, 2009 06:07 pm (UTC)
Aww! Awesome!<3
[identity profile] mihane-echo.livejournal.com on September 25th, 2009 12:01 am (UTC)
Thank you, dear. ;)
[identity profile] lemon-pencil.livejournal.com on September 24th, 2009 06:14 pm (UTC)
Aw, lovely! I like your Sylvia :)
[identity profile] mihane-echo.livejournal.com on September 25th, 2009 12:07 am (UTC)
Hee, thanks. ;D
[identity profile] shining-moment.livejournal.com on September 24th, 2009 07:40 pm (UTC)
Oh, I loved this so much. I love Scary!Sylvia and the Doctor knowing right away she wanted to talk to him.

Gorgeous :D
[identity profile] mihane-echo.livejournal.com on September 25th, 2009 12:50 am (UTC)
Hee, Im so glad! I had fun writing it. :) Whether she's being scary or sweet, Sylvia's fun to write.
hibernate[identity profile] hibernate.livejournal.com on September 24th, 2009 09:16 pm (UTC)
"If we can get through a visit without something attacking, exploding or being sonicked, I'll be impressed."

It'll never happen. :D

I like that you did this from Sylvia's POV. It brought something new to this! And I very much appreciate you writing her as a sympathetic person, because I think she is.
[identity profile] mihane-echo.livejournal.com on September 25th, 2009 12:58 am (UTC)
It'll never happen. :D

Never's right! I think the Doctor could go six days and then-- he'd HAVE to sonic something. Even if it was just sonicking the telly on in lieu of the remote. Or else he'd explode. xD

And thank you, Im really glad you appreciate it. I think too many people look at Sylvia's harshness and think that she doesn't love Donna or treats her badly, but I just don't see that. She's a rather complex and sympathetic character, which is why I like her. ;)
[identity profile] madly-love.livejournal.com on September 25th, 2009 12:05 am (UTC)
That was really lovely. You wrote Sylvia really well♥
[identity profile] mihane-echo.livejournal.com on September 25th, 2009 12:59 am (UTC)
Thank you! <3
sykira[personal profile] sykira on September 25th, 2009 02:49 am (UTC)
oh very nice!
[identity profile] mihane-echo.livejournal.com on September 25th, 2009 10:00 am (UTC)
Thanks. ;D
[identity profile] goodbye2pisces.livejournal.com on September 26th, 2009 01:35 pm (UTC)
I'm totally in love with this story. It's warm and sweet and so perfectly in character. What a wonderful start to my day :D
[identity profile] mihane-echo.livejournal.com on September 27th, 2009 02:31 am (UTC)
Awh, thank you so much, love. I'm glad you enjoyed it! ;D
[identity profile] fransisca.livejournal.com on October 7th, 2009 08:08 pm (UTC)
Oh this is wonderful. It's great to see some Slyvia love.
[identity profile] mihane-echo.livejournal.com on October 8th, 2009 03:16 am (UTC)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. ;D
i will write in words of fire: [oth] don't suppose you have a map?[personal profile] biodamped on October 14th, 2009 10:56 am (UTC)
Bless Sylvia. She's a softie underneath it all, isn't she? :)
[identity profile] mihane-echo.livejournal.com on October 15th, 2009 12:36 pm (UTC)
Absolutely. You don't get loveable Wilf!teddy bear for a dad and not come out with a bit of squishy in your heart. xB